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#FridayFantasy: Winnie-the-Shit
A review of the scenario for Lamentations of the Flame Princess Weird Fantasy Roleplaying published by Lamentations of the Flame Princess.
https://rlyehreviews.blogspot.com/2024/09/friday-fantasy-winnie-shit.html
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@pookie not to be a perfectionist but this sentence “After all he seems intent on twisting and destroying one toy or characters from childhood after another and inflicting the consequences upon some poor settlement of innocent villagers.” I’d suggest modifying it to either “…one toy or character…” or preferably “…toys or characters…” just a mild suggestion, the rest seems unimproved by any more effort.
@pookie for the Atchung Cthulu mission 2 review "It is pitches the Allied Agents of the Britain’s" could be improved by dropping the ‘is’ or dropping it and is an going with ‘This module…’ other than that nothing else jumps out at me at first blush.
Thanks. Fixed on other reviews too.
@pookie for the Shining Shrine Review I would recommend breaking apart the Tamer Class and the Race details. It feels like a more difficult than needful read when attaching those disparate thoughts into the same paragraph in my Not So Humble Opinion.
Thanks. Had a look. Tweaked the paragraph because it needed a rewrite, but thematically, the two elements go together.
@pookie agreed. At one point I was considering suggesting bullet points as a rapid fire way to handle the elements that are a theme but such distinct things.
@Alexander_Anotherskip_Davis I use bullet points in Miskatonic Repository reviews, so do not want to mix the styles.