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@pookie for the Atchung Cthulu mission 2 review "It is pitches the Allied Agents of the Britain’s" could be improved by dropping the ‘is’ or dropping it and is an going with ‘This module…’ other than that nothing else jumps out at me at first blush.

@pookie for the Shining Shrine Review I would recommend breaking apart the Tamer Class and the Race details. It feels like a more difficult than needful read when attaching those disparate thoughts into the same paragraph in my Not So Humble Opinion.

@Alexander_Anotherskip_Davis

Thanks. Had a look. Tweaked the paragraph because it needed a rewrite, but thematically, the two elements go together.

@pookie agreed. At one point I was considering suggesting bullet points as a rapid fire way to handle the elements that are a theme but such distinct things.

@Alexander_Anotherskip_Davis I use bullet points in Miskatonic Repository reviews, so do not want to mix the styles.